Series: Vampire Kisses

Average Rating: 2


Review: Immortal Hearts by Ellen Schreiber

Posted 25 August, 2012 by Gabbie in Review / 0 Comments
Review: Immortal Hearts by Ellen Schreiber

Favorite Quote(s): “I will love you for all of eternity.” Favorite Character: Stormy, because out of all of the characters, she seemed the easiest to relate to. The others had a fake air that surrounded their personas throughout the book. First Line: “I was waiting for the other combat boot to drop.” My Musings: Wow…I am quite shocked. I read the previous books in this series a while ago, and just recently picked up the final novel from the library. Let me say, my opinions on good writing have quite obviously changed. How I had gotten through the rest of the series before this is a mystery. There were a lot of things that struck me as wrong as I read this novel. The beginning was listy, the narration was increasingly simplistic, it was totally predictable, and the language was choppy. I honestly couldn’t get myself immersed in the story. Raven’s character was overly obsessed on becoming a vampire. It was all that she though of. When would he turn me? Why won’t he turn me? I felt like the issue was addressed at least once on every page. Raven’s character, unfortunately, stuck me as static and shallow. Alexander’s character was slightly disappointing too. The only thing we see of him is this vulnerable artistic type–one that apparently doesn’t have many flaws. The world that Schreiber create was just too unrealistic for me. It was so unbelievably […]